Second Eval = Lots of Improvement, More Rewriting

Lucky 13 had some complimentary things for the changes in the second version of "That's Where We Belong" and some more suggestion.  As has happened before, when the song gets tightened up in general, it exposes some more weaknesses that weren't apparent before.  I appreciate Lucky 13 because he takes the time to listen multiple times before forming an opinion.  So... back to rewriting!  : )

Still no "Rubbin' Off On Me" demo... patiently waiting.